What is the winning recipe for a short story? You’ll want something to pull you in sharpish, you want the right amount of detail around the plot and the character(s), and you want the action to be completely engaging and have a conclusion in that short amount of time. Execution, presentation, and a touch of something fresh. Top it all off with something that is unique to the author and you’ve got a signature ‘dish’!
Atomic Number Sixty
|Amazon||ebook||69||indie||Thriller / Short Story||August 4th, 2016|
What would you do, if you only had one hour left to live?
Atomic Number Sixty is the first part of a thrilling series, with 60 chapters each set in real time taking the reader 1 minute to read.
Atomic Number Sixty fits a lot of personality, humor, suspense and urgency into the hour during which Holly observes the bomb counting down the hour to explosion and how she ended up sitting on that dangerous chair in the first place.
Dave Johnston has found a fan in me- I just love his writing style and he seems to know exactly what the reader wants.
Atomic Number Sixty is not simply a story about a girl strapped to a killing chair. It will also capture you with the dynamics of family relationships (which I found utterly hilarious! I LOVED Holly and her Dad!), a date night (again, completely hilarious, but at the same time slowly inching over into how it ties in with the plot) and the bad guy’s history (which was detailed and, shall I say, current). These different elements shook me up a bit, because essentially something really bad was happening, but in between the moments that Holly is moving towards to being dead, Johnston offers comic relief.
‘Squid?’ Dad asked, raising an eyebrow quizzically at me.
‘Let’s just say he had a dodgy case of… the wandering tentacles!’ I clarified, poking Dad’s behind with a banana for sensory effect.
For a brief moment, I thought I perceived a flash of paternal darkness sweep menacingly across my Father’s eyes. It was soon replaced though, by his customary twinkle.
‘If you like,’ he offered. ‘I can remove all of Markus’ bones for you?’
The most admirable aspect for me was that I could get where the antagonist was coming from, why he was doing what he was doing. Yes! No! Of course, you can’t explain and excuse away the killing of innocent people, but what I’m trying to say here is that I liked that Johnston didn’t just put a bad guy in the story because we all know he’s bad. He put a bad guy in the story and told me WHY he was the bad guy… I’m all for balance!
I wondered who was crazier. The brainwashed. Or the worms whispering in their ears, leading them on such a destructive path.
Another note I made while reading this story, was this: Dave Johnston writes Holly Holloway in first person. A guy writing a female and you know what? He does a pretty darned good job at it… I totally felt the girl power!
Like I said: multitasking! The female population can hold its collective head up high. Me personally though, I secretly envy the male population’s super talent: delegation. The ultimate power… often referred to as idleness.
Personal Fun Fact: Holly Holloway made me constantly think of Holly Holm and Max Holloway! #UFC
Massacre of the Sixty
|Amazon||ebook||70||indie||Thriller / Short Story||November 25th, 2016|
The billionaire Mengistu is running a competition with a ten million dollar prize fund: 60 minutes, 60 players, no rules, a straight fight to the death. Massacre of the Sixty attracts only the depraved and psychotic..
<spoiler> Can Holly Holloway survive the carnage to discover more about the shadowy agency “The Hollow Falx”? It’s gonna be brutal, it’s gonna be violent, it’s what she’s trained for.</spoiler>
First of all, I took the liberty of ‘hiding’ a bit of the blurb for Massacre of the Sixty… if you haven’t read Atomic Number Sixty yet, it’s best if you don’t know! My advice, if you go purchasing the stories- try and click the Buy button without reading the synopsis 🙂
Now that the ”cat was out of the bag’ for me, I was wondering… what next!?! How was this bloody death game organized by a billionaire going to play out?
With a lot of action! Massacre of the Sixty should be a freaken’ movie!
‘I’m Psy Nide,’ he hissed dramatically, lifting the axe. ‘I’m solid gold poison.’
Dave Johnston upped the ante in this one… probably, definitely, quite possibly not for readers who can’t take detailed descriptions of people being cut/torn/sliced open… yeah… So while, in Atomic Number Sixty the suspense was gradually building and building with the time ticking away, in Massacre of the Sixty it was wham- straight in!
The signature humor and banter of course continues in this installment. There’s just a lot more blood involved! Did not manage to take a breath with this short story and … um… excuse me, but did he just create 60 freaking awesome names for 60 freaking depraved psychos? Yessir! Yes, he did!
Basically… to keep this short- you know those excitement shivers you get? Yeah, I got the excitement shivers!
Finally… remember I mentioned Dave writing in first person female and doing it well? Yep, yep.. well, he also manages to write some of the male characters into pretty attractive beings… I can’t recall reading a romance book and visualizing the male character as well and as drool worthy as Dave managed to… just odd!
Mr Vaca’s voice was intoxicatingly layered, like a soft voice simultaneously being drowned out by a more dominant one.
So, there we have it folks… if you’re looking for short completely suspenseful reads to fill in an hour here, an hour there, I do recommend checking this series out…
Personally, I hope there’s more to come… let there be mmoooaaarrr!?!