Hi All! So, you might be wondering what kind of a bad joke is this… but yeah, I was searching through some local happenings and found a Creative Writing course in town which runs for 10 weeks, 2 hours every Wednesday evening 7-9pm. I signed up just to get myself out and about to meet people…
By the time I had finished work yesterday, I popped home for a bite and a cuppa and thought, dayum, I am wrecked and I think I’d rather stay home, chill and be my usual houseplant-self. But Man dragged me out the door saying how I was going to write a bestseller one of those days so that he can become a kept man. Now- that is a joke of course! ๐
As always, I arrive early to any of my ‘appointments’ with the idea of getting the best, ‘out of the way’ seat in the room. The table I chose filled up first! Old and young, men and women alike and I thought- look at me with my magnetic aura! ๐ hahaha… wonderful lot of people, though! Next Wednesday can’t come quick enough!
So, the first session was really fun! We did some impromptu writing, read a couple of poems, thought about the technical aspects (e.g. find the words that create an image in your mind; what words are the most important on each line and why, how the poems are structured, etc) and (psycho)analysed the bejeebus out of those 2 poems. It was really interesting to hear people’s different takes and how they understand and translate the possible hidden meanings and ideas. I found the whole atmosphere charged with creative energy, really encouraging and friendly so it was easier to pipe up and give my own 2 cents.
Anyway, with a bit of Twitter-encouragement from my friend Stark from Random Rotten Melon Reads, I thought- you know what, it would be fun to share some of the stuff I write during those sessions. Now, I won’t promise that I will keep this feature up for the next 10 weeks because I can be a flake like that and I honestly admit it. But I will attempt it…
Our first task was to choose a prompt from a list and write from the object’s point of view for a few minutes, whatever came to mind, about what would be around us, what we see, what we think as that object…
The prompt that spoke to me immediately from the whole list was:
A loose button on an old overcoat
And here’s what I came up with:
I know I won’t be able to hold on much longer. I am hanging by a thread that is not even a part of me yet remains an essential.
My world, that I am desperately holding on to, hangs in a narrow hallway, damp and dark. I feel the brush of elbows and breeze of outside air twice a day; wearing down that last string that keeps me from falling off.
It has been three thousand, six hundred and something days since I was last mended by the caring, soft and wrinkly hands. Those old and soft hands no longer occupy this house, no other pair of hands cares for me.
Sometimes a younger pair of hands, hands that shake, push me through the fleece hole as everything that I am a part of is draped over her shoulders. Those rare times, I see the outside again. These young hands shake so much and they smell of cigarettes that I doubt they will ever care for me.
I do not know when the thread will let me go. I do not know when will be the last time I will be of use.
I do not claim to know what I am doing, I do not claim to feel like I have this all under control, I do not claim to have a degree or anything of the sorts in the language of English so my apologies for any glaring stylistic/grammatical mistakes… ahem
What does this prompt ‘A loose button on an old overcoat’ bring to your mind?
Please feel free join in with me and share your own story in the comments ๐
I say, thatโs a fantastic first piece!
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Ah, thank you! ๐
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I read it back and cringe but hey, in the moment, put on a spot – not too bad… at least there were words! ๐
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I think if you were to ask, most writers would probably admit to cringing when they read their own work. But I really loved your words. Very emotive and you made the button sound like a breathing and living thing.
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Mm, you’re right. And I thank you so much- I am glad to get this kind of feedback! ๐
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Yes, Liz! Yes! You made it happen. Your story is awesome! I wanna join in, but my little brain cannot write anything of any worth just off the top of my head. I have to give it some thought. I shall return with a story, though! Watch this space.
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I will watch this space like a hawk because your story will be awesome! โค
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Wow, I think itโs awesome that you are doing this, and if this first piece is anything to go by, I think you are going to be doing great on this! Good luck, and above all: have fun!! ๐๐
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Thank you so much ๐
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Congrats, I’m sure you’re have a best seller one of these days….Possibly on zombie unicorns….has that been done yet?
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hmmm, zombie unicorns… what a marvellous idea! ๐
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Well penned Liz. I am not sure I could’ve come up with anything like what you wrote. Your imagination speaks volumes. Milou and I might be looking into doing a creative course in the new year as well…
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Thank you! In all honesty when I heard we were going to be writing right there and then I freaked, but once the prompt landed in front of me, the words just flowed… won’t be winning awards for it, but the point is that with some inspiration it’s entirely possible.
Do sign up for something creative with your missus because it’s hella fun! ๐
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That’s fantastic Liz, really cool.๐ Good luck with the course too.๐๐
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Drew! Thank you ๐ coming for you- master of wordery, it means a lot! ๐
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I like that!
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That course sounds like so much fun! And what an excellent start as well. Good luck with the course! ๐
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Thank you so much ๐ I hope I’ll be able to definitely come away with some new, much needed smarts ๐
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Ooo, how exciting! ๐
Good luck!
The button story was great. I would never have thought of it based on the prompt. Haha.
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Thank you! ๐
I was so worried on the night when we had to read our stories to the group that they’d find me a tad too dark but it seemed to go down well. ๐ They seemed to enjoy the implied pun in there too, hehehe…
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I’m so glad this was fun!! And your writing is so beautiful! I agree with Norrie- I never would have come up with something as good as that!
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Aw, thank you!!! Coming from you- that means a lot! ๐ And you’re right, you wouldn’t come up with something simply good like my story- you’d do way – way-way- better! ๐ โค
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hahaha that’s too sweet! But I honestly mean that your writing was excellent and I loved it!! โค
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I love that opening “I know I wonโt be able to hold on much longer. I am hanging by a thread that is not even a part of me yet remains an essential.” – literary gold, my friend, I think you have a best seller hidden in you after all ๐ I look forward too seeing more of your writing, and learning some writing tips and tricks. I just got an copy of ‘First You Write a Sentence.’ by Joe Moran, maybe you need to check it out, as it’s apparently a must read for writers!
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Aw, thank you so much! You put a daft smile on my face just now- hahaha… Definitely makes me excited for next Wednesday and to share the new shenanigans with you and all ๐
Yes! I saw on your Instagram about that book and I took note like straight away to make sure to get me a copy! ๐
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When you write that bestseller, you can thank me by putting me in your acknowledgments ๐๐๐คฃ
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Deal! ๐ ๐
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Argh, I’m so excited for you! I’m so happy that you enjoyed your first session! I love your interpretation of the loose button on an overcoat. If only inanimate objects, such as clothing, could talk. The stories we’d hear. I’m interested to hear more about the overcoat, the places it’s been and the things it’s seen ๐ Can’t wait to read what you write at the next session!
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Jayzus, Liis, you almost made me cry over a fecking button! I knew you would do well with this because your reviews are always so well written and interesting. I am happy your hubs pushed you out the door! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ #JazzHands
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Wow, thank you so much for your kind words and I really really appreciate that you enjoy my ‘rambles’ so much… it means a lot to me because I know you have high standards ๐ haha, well, I know I am nowehere close but that you enjoy my writing in some way really really makes me feel proud! Thank you! โค
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Obviously, you shouldn’t flake and keeping doing this series of posts if only because it’s obviously super popular! Look at all these comments! โค You have a gift, Liis. I love what you've done with the prompt and I cannot wait to see what progress you make over the next 10 weeks.
Do you have an idea in your head for a story? Or are you more into poetry? Do you have a goal to reach by taking these classes?
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Thank you so much! It means a lot coming from you ๐ โค
I am quite excited, too! As the weeks are going by, some tutelage certainly sticks and it seems like the focus by this particular tutor is to keep things simple and very focused… I've got some interesting critique which I need to mull on. I haven't decided yet if the fault is with my style – even though i can certainly improve it- or if the tutor has his own specific preference!
I have so many ideas in my head- I think that's part of the problem with not having been able to sit down and really expand on a single idea… my decision making and sticking to something needs work! hahaha… but my goal is really to apply some technical tips and insert into my mind that there are so many ways to have inspiration and use it!
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Great! I don’t have any ideas in my head, so when I want to write, I have to depend on writing prompt journals and other such tools. This is why I like to blog; there is always something for me to write about when it comes to book reviews. I struggle a lot more with discussion posts, but they are also a good way to push myself. ๐
I hope that you gain the technical tips you are looking for and you can find a way to put the ideas from your head onto paper! I cannot wait to see where this journey takes you.
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Hi Liz, I love your “button” story. It instantly reminded me of an old person talking. How they were once loved and cared for but now forgotten and time is wearing them away. I really felt sorry for the button. I wanted to take him home and look after him! lol. I also do creative writing – hope you are enjoying it! xx
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Thank you, you got my button story perfectly, this is exactly what I was aiming for ๐
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Ohhh that’s so clever! Hanging on by a thread, a coat that once belonged to someone but isn’t there anymore making that coat pretty much useless… Wooow! I’m actually excited for you for all these classes! Glad you’re doing these courses and thank you so much for sharing it with us! Keep on writing, Liz! ๐
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This is such an amazing first piece. I could actually picture the jacket and the button. Youโre an amazing writer.
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Thank you so much! ๐
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Youโre welcome ๐
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